Here are two more ways to cut down on lengthy sentences or paragraphs! Avoid using excessive metaphors or using definitions instead of single impactful words.
Author: N. K. Valek
N.K. Valek is a writer raised through roleplaying. Be it live action or text based, to this day, she still loves pretending to be someone else doing something else, somewhere else. Bonus points if magic is involved. Actually, those are probably the only points.
4.12.24 Draft 8 Update
Draft 8 is officially in the hands of multiple betas and I am building my query list and supplies.
Filler Words, Filter Words, and General Fluff
Delete the fluff! Cast it into the fire!
3.19.24 DRAFT 8
I'm not dead. Also, I NEVER UPDATED THIS? *Carelessly flips table out a 50 story window* Dang, that's a lot of stories.
Pieces of Me by Kate McLaughlin
We all must learn to love ourselves. Trust the system~ Normal is subjective and inconsistent. (Here lies an intense journey of a girl discovering she has Dissociative Identity Disorder)
N. K. Valek: Author 