How you work with dialogue and dialogue tags affects whether your scene has "Talking Head Syndrome" or not. With a snippet of a recently deleted scene from my WIP, here is a short lesson regarding that.
Tag: Dialogue
Avoiding Redundancy in Writing
Many writers struggle with redundancy or repetition at some point in their career. Here are some tips to make your writing stronger!
Clay, by David Almond
Clay boy, Clay boy Where have you gone? Murder is not how you can belong. Clay boy, Clay boy We all fear this thing. Death is the ending of all life could bring.
N. K. Valek: Author 