How you work with dialogue and dialogue tags affects whether your scene has "Talking Head Syndrome" or not. With a snippet of a recently deleted scene from my WIP, here is a short lesson regarding that.
Tag: How to write better
Filler Words, Filter Words, and General Fluff
Delete the fluff! Cast it into the fire!
9 Ways to Lessen Your Word Count
Here are 9 things you might try in order to shorten your word count to the sweet spot you so crave!
N. K. Valek: Author 