How you work with dialogue and dialogue tags affects whether your scene has "Talking Head Syndrome" or not. With a snippet of a recently deleted scene from my WIP, here is a short lesson regarding that.
Tag: Writing tips
Dreams And Writing
Due to problems, I haven't been able to work on my new draft for book 1 for a while. HOWEVER, I AM BACK AT IT.
Piranesi by Susanna Clarke
Piranesi by Susanna Clarke is not about a minotaur playing a trumpet on a random pillar. It is about a man. I cannot say anything else because the entire book is a plot twist as intricate and intense as the twisting halls and tides in the house (vast, vast world) where it takes place.
Inkheart by Cornelia Funke
4/5 It was a great start, but got weaker and a little muddled near the end. Still good enough for me to be curious about the next book!
Theme: Puzzle Competition (10 characters)
Let's build a puzzle! Let's build one together! And let's do it faster than the other team! Will it be awkward? Deadly? You decide!
N. K. Valek: Author 